Here's my recording for my IOC
Grading:
Criterion A: 6
I felt that I didn't give a large amount of context about the text in general and I could have referenced the text to support what I was saying more.
Criterion B: 4
I felt like, while I did try to show effect on tone/meaning, it did not translate very well. Also, I needed to show how it affected the reader.
Criterion C: 4
Over all the structure was good, but at times I wasn't very coherent.
Criterion D: 3
I felt like I did communicate my message overall. However, I struggled to find my words sometimes and I paused to think.
Things I would do differently:
Write out my conclusion more carefully
Look more at effect and actually write them down
Here's my pssage and planning:
(I would recommend opening them in a new tab and enlarging them to read)
PS: In lieu of Ms.G's pump up song, I've decided to add my contribution:
